When my video was reviewed by the class, it was highly
praised on the concept, however, many said I needed to elaborate with the plot,
by filming more shots to place a greater emphasis on both the characters and their situations.
I agree with this, as during the review, I had to explain many of the scenes so that they could be understood, which a film
maker in the industry shouldn't have to do.
With this feedback in mind I shall film a number of extra
shots not initially in the storyboard in order to make the plot more
understandable to viewers. I shall also retake some of the existing shots, as there was, on many of them
too much camerashake, causing the film to look very unprofessional,
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